A 90-minute review
Soorathep Kheawhom
2105620 · Research Communication Skills for Chemical Engineers
Question → Evidence → Claim
| Time | Decisions to revisit |
|---|---|
| 03-21 min | Contribution, publication, literature and evidence |
| 21-42 min | IMRaD, Introduction, aims and Methods |
| 42-69 min | Results, statistics and reproducible figures |
| 69-90 min | Discussion, Conclusion and application |
Weeks 1, 3, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9 and 10
Use several structural clues together. Length alone does not establish the genre.
Check four things before drafting:
State one central claim and the evidence that warrants it.
System AND process AND metric
Example concept blocks:
Use OR within a concept and AND between concepts. Add spelling variants, older names, and abbreviations. Check database syntax before running the query.
Search log: database, date, full query, filters, hit count.
Reference record: verify authors, title, year, journal, and DOI against the source.
Capture → check → organize → cite.
Zotero stores and formats records. Accurate records and source verification make the bibliography dependable.
Set inclusion criteria before screening.
Build one row per study:
Claim · system · conditions · metric with units · limitation
Compare claims only after checking that conditions and definitions are comparable.
Pair task, 60 seconds: Do these outcomes establish a contradiction?
Lifetime gain from additive X versus control:
Synthetic teaching data. Uncertainty is unreported.
These outcomes do not establish a contradiction.
Whether the additive’s effect changes remains unresolved.
Next step: compare treatment and control while varying one condition systematically.
Check alignment: aim → method → result → interpretation.
Every link needs a traceable connection to the next.
For each paragraph:
Topic: zinc dendrites.
Function: narrows the problem to high-current zinc operation.
Repeated functions can reveal a stalled argument.
Each move should advance the argument. Avoid narrowing to the same point twice.
Absence: Few studies report blended-solvent degradation under realistic flue gas.
Gap: Without degradation rates under those conditions, solvent replacement costs cannot be estimated reliably.
Build the argument in three steps:
Known → not known → consequence.
Identify the prediction, explanation, or decision that missing evidence prevents.
Weak: Understand solvent degradation.
Operational: Measure the degradation rate of two solvent blends at two oxygen levels under a fixed temperature and gas composition.
This aim requires:
Synthetic teaching example.
Make the work checkable:
Define failure, efficiency, and stable operationally. An instrument name cannot replace a complete procedure.
Pair task, 60 seconds
Three film batches are prepared independently per formulation. Four coupons are tested from each batch.
Treatment: additive X. Control: the same formulation without X.
For formulation comparison:
Synthetic teaching example.
n = 3 independent batches per formulation.
The 12 coupons are subsamples.
Make the control comparison and the meaning of n explicit.
At 2.0 s, raising temperature from 300 to 375 °C increased mean conversion by 40 percentage points and reduced mean selectivity by 25 percentage points.
These measurements show a trade-off within the tested range.
| Design | What does the replication support? |
|---|---|
| Three independently prepared runs | n = 3 runs |
| One run measured three times | n = 1 run, three technical readings |
Repeated readings help assess measurement repeatability. They do not create independent experiments.
State the sampling unit, not just a number.
| Quantity | Meaning |
|---|---|
| SD | Spread among independent runs |
| SE | Estimated precision of the mean; SD/√n |
| 95% CI | Uncertainty in the population mean; 95% long-run coverage under stated assumptions |
Define the bars. SD-bar overlap alone does not test significance.
Work alone, then compare with a partner.
Conversion changes from 40% to 80%. Selectivity changes from 90% to 65%.
For each response, write:
Which wording makes the denominator explicit?
| Response | Percentage-point change | Relative change |
|---|---|---|
| Conversion | 80 − 40 = +40 pp | 40/40 × 100 = +100% |
| Selectivity | 65 − 90 = −25 pp | −25/90 × 100 = −27.8% |
“Conversion doubled” and “conversion increased by 40 percentage points” describe the same comparison.
| Reader’s question | Useful display |
|---|---|
| How does response vary with temperature? | Points; optional connecting lines |
| How variable are the runs? | Individual points plus a defined summary |
| What are the exact values? | A table with units and uncertainty |
These separate n = 6 examples share mean 50% and SD 5.14 pp, but counts at or above 54% differ. Lines guide the eye unless a model is stated.
Bars encode length from a zero baseline. Points and lines can use a clearly labeled restricted range.
Check axes, dual axes, uncertainty, selected ranges, false resolution and image provenance.
Figure 1. Conversion of A and selectivity to B versus temperature at a residence time of 2.0 s. Points are means of three independent runs per temperature. Bars show ±1 sample SD. Lines guide the eye. Values are synthetic teaching data.
Check: quantity, conditions, summary, uncertainty, independent unit and other marks.
| Temperature (°C) | Run | Conversion (%) | Selectivity (%) |
|---|---|---|---|
| 300 | 1 | 38 | 91 |
| 300 | 2 | 40 | 90 |
| 300 | 3 | 42 | 89 |
Keep conversion and selectivity paired within each run. Preserve the original table.
| Temperature (°C) | Mean X ± SD (%) | Mean S ± SD (%) | n |
|---|---|---|---|
| 300 | 40 ± 2 | 90 ± 1 | 3 |
| 325 | 55 ± 2 | 86 ± 1 | 3 |
| 350 | 70 ± 2 | 78 ± 1 | 3 |
| 375 | 80 ± 2 | 65 ± 1 | 3 |
Check one group by hand. Keep means and SDs in the same temperature order. Then label, export and reopen the figure.
Keep together:
Rebuild from a fresh start. Confirm that the same inputs recreate the summary and figure without hidden steps.
Another person should be able to follow the package.
For this 1:1 reaction, estimated yield = mean conversion × mean selectivity / 100.
| Temperature (°C) | Mean X (%) | Mean S (%) | Estimated yield (%) |
|---|---|---|---|
| 300 | 40 | 90 | 36.0 |
| 325 | 55 | 86 | 47.3 |
| 350 | 70 | 78 | 54.6 |
| 375 | 80 | 65 | 52.0 |
At 2.0 s, 350 °C has the highest estimate among those tested. The preferred condition depends on the objective and constraints.
The temperature trend alone does not establish a mechanism.
| Possible explanation | Controlled comparison | Predicted outcome if it contributes |
|---|---|---|
| B undergoes further reaction | Vary residence time at fixed temperature | Lower S and more byproducts would be consistent with further reaction |
| Sampling or analysis bias | Process known mixtures through the same procedure | Measured recovery depends on procedure or condition |
A predicted pattern supports an explanation; one test rarely excludes every alternative.
Before claiming agreement or improvement, check:
Cite a verified source. If evidence is missing, state what must be found; do not invent a literature result.
| Evidence boundary | Consequence for wording |
|---|---|
| Four temperatures | “Highest among those tested” |
| Only 2.0 s residence time | Keep “at 2.0 s” in the claim |
| Three independent runs per temperature | Acknowledge uncertain variability estimates |
| No energy or stability measurements | Reserve judgment on industrial suitability |
A useful limitation changes interpretation or identifies the next test.
Use three moves:
Keep every result traceable to Results. A Conclusion should not introduce a new result or an untested promise.
Revise this claim in two sentences:
375 °C is the best condition because conversion is highest. The selectivity trend proves that B decomposes.
Include:
Use the table: estimated yield is 54.6% at 350 °C, versus 52.0% at 375 °C.
At 2.0 s, the yield estimate from mean conversion and selectivity was highest among the four temperatures at 350 °C: 54.6%, versus 52.0% at 375 °C.
This comparison identifies a condition for further testing; a controlled residence-time study with byproduct measurements could test further reaction of B as one possible explanation.